Tuesday, February 21, 2012

Another Idea for a Script...

I am... The oracle of awesomeness... Speak, oh fateful one. Hey, One thing you should know about me is that I hate to be on the same idea for a longish period of time. So, I have yet another script idea. Actually, it's more of an idea for a new character and her first episode. I shall define who she is, then her back story, and finally, her first episode. Read it and weep.
Name: Sweeney Naomi Sparrow
Gender: Yes, she is a girl...
Age: 16
I.Q.: 190 (three points higher than Reid)
Job(s): College professor (Montana State, half year, Sociology), BAU Special Agent
School(s): No Elementary, Mt. Tabor Middle School, online high school, Montana State
PhD(s): Sociology and Psychology
BA(s): World Language and Medical
Story: Her parents were expecting to have a boy and they loved the musical Sweeney Todd, so they named her Sweeney. Her parents died at age 4. At the orphanage, at age 5, they found out that she was at a middle school learning level, so she skipped all of elementary and went to middle school for a year. She felt akward around people so, after she ran away from the orphanage, she took online high school. She ended up being smarter than most of the teachers. Since Sweeney was always correcting them, they figured that she could graduate at age 10. She took one year of medical school and Montana State, one year of world languages, and three years of Sociology. By this time, she was 14. She became a professor at Montana State, teaching Sociology, but then the government found out and had her resign. Rossi knew her parents from high school and first, paid for most of her college expenses, then told her of the BAU. She went back to school, took one and a half years of Psychology, getting her PhD. The other reason Rossi paid for her schooling was that she reminded him of Reid.
First Episode: She, along with the help of Rossi, applied for a job with the BAU. Hotch knew how old she was, so they figured out a plan to let her work with them. Rossi would pay for lodging, transportation, and food. The rest of the team doesn't trust her because she gets angry when her age is asked about and they don't know how old she is. Morgan has Garcia look her up. After finding out her age, he confronts her. Sweeney gets angry and half lashes out at him (Because of her inexperience with people, she doesn't deal with anger well). Meanwhile a case is going on. A guy is killing prostitutes from a club called the Viper Room (named after the club Johnny Depp co-owned). Later on, the whole team minus Garcia and Hotch go to the club. The bodyguard at the door hastles Sweeney because he knows her I.D. is fake.Rossi makes a distraction by saying that the owner of the club asked her to come. While inside, a man asks to dance with her. His name is Erik. She does and gets his number. She notices Reid's hopelessness with girls. Even though she has anger issues, she knows how to make girls go crazy. so, Sweeney dances with him. It works and the girls are all over him. Rossi and then later Reid, thank her. Erik calls her about evidence of the killer. It isn't till she gets there that she realizes that Erik is the killer. He shows her the rope he will use to hang her with. He begins to pester her about her age. She tells him after her arm is dislocated (this is the first time her age is mentioned). The police and the BAU show up, answering a neighbour's distress call, hearing the screams inside. They try negotiating with Erik, but he's tying the knot. Morgan, Reid, and Prentiss begin sneaking up from the back. Erik puts the noose around Sweeney's neck and goes to push her. Prentiss shoots him and he falls on Sweeney, causing her to hang. Morgan cuts the rope while Reid loosens the knot. Whn the rope comes off, she gasps for air and holds onto the closest person, Reid. Even though now the whole team knows her age, they don't say anything and she stays on the team. The episode ends with Reid and Sweeney playing chess. She actually beats him. He suggests poker. She smiles and gets out a deck of cards.

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