Monday, February 20, 2012

I'm trying to write a Criminal Minds script...

Hello, You've tapped into the main computer of the FCAI (Federal Company of Abnormal Intelligence). Hey, I am trying to create a script for the best show on t.v. right now. I have not gotten very far. I shall tell you what it is about.
There is a mystery/crime novelist and when she was twelve, there was a murderer dubbed "Anonomous Mr. X" (Sorry about the name, I know it sucks). As we know, Hotch and Rossi used to work together previous to the BAU. Alice, the novelist, was one of the victims and when she was about to be killed, Hotch, Rossi, and the rest of their team back then, got there and stopped it. She was sent to live in England, where her aunt lived. Eight years later, Anonomous Mr. X is back and the BAU is assigned to the case. Hotch and Rossi decide that Alice could be able to help them, since she was a victim. Of course, they forget to tell her what the case is about. When the case is reveiwed among the BAU, she freaks and runs out of the building. Hotch confronts her and Rossi is stuck with the team who are quite confused. She comes back inside and tells them that she is a victim of the murderer. Alice decides that in order to get rid of her fears, she must help the BAU withthis case. The BAU is concerned that she won't be able to help them. Especially Dr. Reid because he knows what it's like to be in a hostage/victim sitution and he worried about the possibility of post tramatic stress disorder (post TSD). Hotch fears that the killer is waiting to attack his unfinished victim (Alice) whom Hotch treats as if she was another of his children. He is taking her to and from her hotel room. On the second day of searching and profiling, Hotch was taking her to her hotel and a sniper shot through the window and through her hand. While she is in the hospital, Rossi suggests that they have her stay with the rest of the BAU so that she can be protected. The rest of them agree and so she stays with each of them (Not including Garcia). With Hotch, Alice stays up all night, looking at the pictures of the bodies, new and old. She notices that the deaths were becoming more rushed and the cause of deaths were different (the older victims were stabbed, the newer ones were caused by head trauma). Alice begins to realize that in order to catch Mr. X, she has to go to him. So, one night, she arms herself with Reid's Glock 19 and goes to the same abandoned house that she was suppose to die in. As she expected, he was there. His identity was revealed as the sherriff. He tries to kill her again, but, Reid woke up and notified the rest of the BAU. They got there in time to stop himbefore anything really happened, other than a deep cut on her cheek. Theyarrest him and soon after, she decides to go home to England. This depresses Hotch and the rest of the BAU.

THE END!

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